2016-08-02 19:35:51 |
Atsila : The Beginning (Edited)
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Story handled very well. Could use double spacing between paragraphs. I am very familiar with this problem, since I had outrageous difficulty in adjusting to the formatting of this site. |
2016-08-02 22:08:53 |
The Taxi Driver_(2)
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Thank you, Anon reader. Actually some of my stories are quite smutty. But, not his one. Thankfully, I have actually received a lot of encouragement and support on this site. There is a 'group (?)' that is dedicated to voting down my stories for some imagined slight that I have committed. But, interestingly, after the initial 3 or 4 automatic negative votes, the remaining votes tend to be spread fairly and the total rating tends to raise to a representative number. Karma, I guess. |
2016-11-04 18:56:12 |
AN OPEN LETTER TO GOD
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Pernicious Well stated variant opinion. Thank You. One of the reasons that I instituted this posting. |
2017-01-07 17:49:54 |
TAXI DRIVER 1 (THE RUNAWAY)
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Thank You sir. I write some of my stories to balance out the epic optimism of so many of them here. Sexuality is good and fun. But, in certain avenues, such as incest, marital unfaithfulness and prostitution, the outcome is far to often very tragic. I am in my seventies and have seen just too much of that, especially from my years in the cab. As I stated in my letter to God, I hope that there might be a place somewhere were those of us who are well meaning, but not perfect could live safe and full lives. Would like to see those like Jazzmine come back to a reasonably happy life, no matter how she chooses to live it. |
2017-05-04 15:24:07 |
A younger version
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Inventive story done very well! |