2018-02-11 05:47:39 |
MY KINKY STORIES THREAD [REPOSTS]
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‘The Hitch Hiker’ was interesting as I have never read a story with such a character before, but I particularly enjoyed ‘The Store Manager’. Have you written anything else with a similar story line? Robbie. |
2018-02-11 07:58:55 |
1975 – A Year to Remember. Chapter 5
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A great series. Did it have to end there - I would enjoy reading more on their continuing adventures? Robbie. |
2018-02-13 08:25:14 |
SUSPECT BUSINESS PRACTICES-FIVE STORIES
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A little impersonal but deserves a better score than 50%. Small mistakes need cleaning up also: locking the door twice; unrealistic to still be wearing an overcoat. Mostly though just too impersonal, sorry. Robbie. |
2018-02-13 08:42:41 |
SUSPECT BUSINESS PRACTICES-FIVE STORIES
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Sorry, comment below related to story 5. Robbie. |
2018-02-18 05:26:48 |
THE BOSS'S SLUT 11: Bitches In Heat
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The car journey is amazing. Stepping out at the restaurant coincided with my own arrival and I could read no more. Wonderful, thank you. Robbie. |