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Comments from RandomRobbie
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-27 05:59:51 | The Resistance: Part 2 | Enjoyable part 2 and you have something good to work on but sex needs to be longer and more detailed still, and story needs to be longer. |
| 2018-04-27 05:39:51 | The Resistance | Very interesting start, very different. I am surprised more have not commented, I am looking forward to reading the next part. I had no problem following. You could put more detail into the sex though: a little short and quick for me. Also the story was not very long so hoping the next part is longer. |
| 2017-04-18 04:14:32 | Taste Of Glory | Great story Michelle. As soon as I read it I had to read another of yours immediately, before even posting this review. The ending made it. |
| 2017-04-18 04:11:47 | Winner's Choice | Great story Michelle. The standard of stories from women writers is so much higher; and as a man great to get a woman's perspective. I love poker stories: please continue it, or write a new one. RandomRobbie. |
| 2017-04-14 07:47:02 | The Birthday Gift_(1) | If you are going to offer grammatical etcetera advice make sure you know what you are talking about. 'Too' means both 'in addition' and 'also'. Obvious as they share similar meanings. 'To' is completely different. Many people find it very difficult to proof read their own work as you 'read' what you intended to write not what appeared. If ever you want a proof reader before you post please feel free to send a story to me. I liked you story very much Mystic47 and loved the detail. You know it is good when you get positive comments from women readers. I am male but find stories written by women are generally better than those written by men. As a man it is great to read from a woman's perspective. Robert. |