| 2018-07-28 20:38:41 |
Panopticon
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This is a brilliant piece on a number of levels such as creativity, style and constructional use of our frickin language. I hope you keep publishing here. You seem to have the talent, the skills and resolve to be a professional writer. |
| 2018-07-31 01:31:17 |
Creating My Hot Wife 10_(0)
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"Papa". Thx for the encouraging words. I am considering writing a book. Actually I'm writing here to just practice developing my skill and my "voice." I'm really a much better speaker and have spoken at major conferences about sexuality, in particular on polyamory which is my passion. I want to describe it in detail. I'm working on that right now and will publish a next story soon which starts a new series. I believe it will be my best writing and you might find it rather unique among the thousands of stories here. "Swapping Fathers" The ratings will go up over time. I realize these aren't the best "stroke stories." Let me know what you think about the new direction. |
| 2018-08-13 20:10:58 |
the first time I wached my wife
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Great story! Keep going! How far did you go with this? I know from experience how intense it is to watch. I never got tired of seeing my wife fuck someone, literally hundreds of times. |
| 2018-08-13 22:50:38 |
Council Dinner
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Hearing your mate tell of her sexual encounters is really hot stuff and only surpassed by anticipating the next one together, dreaming planning imagining. It's the best of times. |
| 2018-08-15 16:04:33 |
The Concierge
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Keep going. You set an interesting table. |