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Comments from DudeInATurtleneck
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-07-16 22:05:30 | Surprise Internet hook-up | Okay, I’m blind :) Any chance of a THIRD part? |
| 2020-07-23 17:28:24 | Love is all that matters pt1- Stairway to heaven | You do good work but you need to actually FINISH things... |
| 2020-07-23 17:30:00 | Love is all that matters pt1- Stairway to heaven | Sorry...wrong story! :) So “good story...enjoyed it greatly!” |
| 2020-08-05 21:17:38 | A Dish Best Seved Cold or Bryan's Revenge 2 | A very good story, well written -as most of yours are. That being said, I have to say I agree with the majority of the opinions here: it did NOT really conclude. You said in a comment you don’t like sequels because some people are never satisfied...I’m sorry, that really doesn’t wash; the original story, itself, didn’t really conclude; the promise of revenge, the mystery of why Courtney would do that, wondering what would happen to the myriad characters...none of that was resolved in what BECAME part one, but was apparently originally intended as a stand-alone. |
| 2020-08-05 21:18:33 | A Dish Best Seved Cold or Bryan's Revenge 2 | (Part two of comments) It’s not that “some people aren’t satisfied”...it really is because of how you chose to write the story...I you introduced many characters and a situation that was not completely resolved. That’s it. You can fix that with a conclusion , or not...that’s up to you. But you’re posting stories to a site with the express intention of having them read; you can’t expect people to NOT have legitimate issues with some of them. |