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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-07-08 00:58:07 | daddy's daughters diaries part3 | I fully agree with the other comment. I see (possibly) the friendship of Crystal & Madison to expand to a foursome with Harry & James (Daddy). With the background & story line, it is expected. Somehow there needs to be an unexpected turn. I'm not sure what to suggest, because I'm not that creative like you are. Keep it up, you're doing well. The more you write, the better & easier it will become. Think about a twist or surprise to make it a little more interesting, instead of expected. |
| 2018-07-08 01:17:49 | Daddy's daughters diary part 1 | Author, was going to PM U but a block on Ur profile. I don't want Ur profile just to PM you some of my thoughts. I'm looking forward to the next installment fresh off the press. Other comments on next 2 parts, too. |
| 2018-07-08 03:10:23 | I'm So Drunk Right Now... | Yes you should keep writing. If there were any typos or misspelling, I didn't catch them. Like 1 comment, I like a story that has some substance to it, and this one does. Fucking & oral is great, but a character with depth needs to be involved, not just a guy & a slut. Another prime factor, it's believable. I'm sure there are a few goons out there that say "i'm a guy, Your a girl, lets fuck" & she says, "Sure" & bends over;but that's not the norm. Thank you for sharing your talent, Good luck in your future endeavors. |
| 2018-07-08 12:49:32 | An Office Affair_(0) | Andrea lu,, I'd sure like to read your story, with as many details as possible. 5'2" Anonymous, I'd like to read your story also, with as many details as possible. Melanie, your stories are exquizet. (I can spell) Surely you get my meaning. This one is as awesome & outstanding as any of them. Your talent is fantatsic. I would really like to see a sequal continuation of this epiasode. A woman's perspective can go in generalities or storyline with "hot juicy" details. You creative talent interestingly give the generalities & background & character development, then when the inevidible sex occurs, your "hot & juicy" details are awesome & fantastic *( Use &, 2 spaces rather than 4) |
| 2018-07-08 13:54:23 | A Change Will Do You Good. | Classic presentation as always for you. The depth & sensitivity of your writing makes me think you have intimately researched & interviewed many interesting people. Some of your details of experience could have not been all yours only! I fully agree with the other comments available to me to see. I search your authors name and just keep reading. (Truthfully, there are a few other authors, I have done likewise.) Creative, imaginative, good writers stand out & I like to read other of their works. Seldom disappointed. Do you plan to write a sequal whereas these two finally meet Ms Right, marry but miss their intimate relationship. When their wives find out, they all end up in a bi foursome swapping all around, everyway That sounds hot, hot. If you do, I know it'll be "Top drawer" and outstanding!!! WOW! |