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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
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2019-12-15 02:41:13 | Seducing our Friend_(1) | Excellent, just like all Ur works I've read. My 1st was "Like a good Neighbor"; read the whole series 3 times at least. Each time is just as exciting as my wife of 25 yrs!. Love Ur details & plots; good tech (grammar, spelling. etc.) most of the time. |
2019-12-16 06:39:40 | The Lady from Church_(0) | You'er right that this could go many different directions. Great plot & details of action. Expected more in a series. Funny thing, this story has been posted 3 days, this is the 1st time I've taken the time to read the story but "You've already voted on this story" The system is screwed up; my votes aren't being counted Good work! . |
2019-12-16 17:28:51 | Gym Teacher 1 | Several of your stories have referred to this series So since I had some time, I decided to read them. AWESOME! Your tech issues aren't bad enough to detract from the story. You know, critics can' t write. Noticed changed in your tech stuff from time to time as I've read thru your list. The scenarios (live events) are always top drawer. & I see improvement from time to time in your tech issues (like more " "), better paragraphs, etc (& typos) Looking to rest of the series "Gym Teacher" |
2019-12-16 21:42:30 | Gym Teacher 2 | AWESOME! |
2019-12-17 03:28:52 | Gym Teacher 3 Revised | This "revised edition" is a great story but also one of Ur worst as far as tech issues. Read some of the other stories first (like "Mother-in-law MILF", the reference to "Gym Teacher " makes more since (can't spell so don't write).Love the story & details of the action! Don't worry, excellent story there have posted some that are unreadable; yours's get better as I have read a lot in your list (Like a good Neighbor) Love i.t. |