| 2019-12-22 01:40:29 |
His Hardware....Her Software 2
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Don'r know why u guys do that. Start a good story or series then stop right in the middle of it leaving readers just hanging out there wondering "What's next?" The "pt 3" should include Angie (sister), Hanna (step-daughter of sorts), & Gwen, in a foursome with Max & he satisfies every one of them. A year later, it's not yet been written! AWESOME pt 1 & 2. Lousy follow up & ending! |
| 2019-12-22 13:22:34 |
Open Minds leads to Open Hearts 2
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e did it again! a wonderful story with tremendous potential, yet it just stops before a beautiful ending. After Liz & Kate join in with their parents foursome to make 6 both girls end up prego, all the women get Dp'd, Bella & Liz 69 as well as Kelly & Kate, just for the variety of experience. Soon, every weekend possible, the 4 parents have a swap met, :& daughters usually partsapte in some way. |
| 2019-12-22 13:22:35 |
Open Minds leads to Open Hearts 2
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e did it again! a wonderful story with tremendous potential, yet it just stops before a beautiful ending. After Liz & Kate join in with their parents foursome to make 6 both girls end up prego, all the women get Dp'd, Bella & Liz 69 as well as Kelly & Kate, just for the variety of experience. Soon, every weekend possible, the 4 parents have a swap met, :& daughters usually partsapte in some way. |
| 2019-12-22 14:13:48 |
Open Minds leads to Open Hearts 2
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Started to correct "participate" But posted instead. Spelling & computer skills are two major reasons I do not write for you. My life experiences come nowhere close to T.foxal or some of the other HOT authors, but if I could effectively relate the true stories on paper, U should enjoy some of them. But I don't want to do a sloppy,***********, so I sit back, read, & wish. Awesome job on "Open Minds Lead to open Hearts" like other of your serie, but the ending stinks as incomplete, yet with so much potential for a 5 or 6 part story..Thanks for what U do, at least enjoyed that much & would probably enjoyed the "rest of the story" had it been completed. |
| 2019-12-22 14:13:48 |
Open Minds leads to Open Hearts 2
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Started to correct "participate" But posted instead. Spelling & computer skills are two major reasons I do not write for you. My life experiences come nowhere close to T.foxal or some of the other HOT authors, but if I could effectively relate the true stories on paper, U should enjoy some of them. But I don't want to do a sloppy,***********, so I sit back, read, & wish. Awesome job on "Open Minds Lead to open Hearts" like other of your serie, but the ending stinks as incomplete, yet with so much potential for a 5 or 6 part story..Thanks for what U do, at least enjoyed that much & would probably enjoyed the "rest of the story" had it been completed. |