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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-05 06:27:12 | Well, That Backfired_(1) | Agree with all the comments about Ur versatility in writing. U did the POV* with continuity, exactness, & precision. Look forward to the next parts. * Point of view |
| 2019-06-05 18:12:11 | Well, That Backfired 3 | "Life goes on"until it ends. Gas leak, Huh? Outstanding POV. Sometimes the description of positioning a little unclear, especially during the DP & a third partner adding to the exciting debauchery taking place. For instance is Sierra facing Tom (Jr) as Lorie sits on his face & is she with pussy on his mouth or ass on his mouth to kiss & suck mouth &/or tits on Sierra as she rides him (Cowgirl or Reverse Cowgirl)??? Once, Tom Jr was fucking Sierra in the ass but cums in her pussy; when did the change take place? I missed the move.!! Ur imagination for sexual entanglements is awesome. Seems that changes in attitude, likes & desires are quicker than realistic. Part of the revelation being "This is what they were & this event made them realize it..Pushed the envelope"" Excellent presentation. Good Job; Don't Stop writing |
| 2019-06-05 19:54:24 | Staying Close to My Sister (and Mom)_(2) | I love it. Just moved a little faster than expected. Of course, the admiration & horny need had been there for a long time. Did Mom & Sis really plan it? A lot of love in that family to overcome the jealously of 2 hot & horny women. Most individual hesitate to share a sex partner "Lord help the sister (or Mom) that gets between me & my man" RIVALRY between me & my man" Even here, "He fucks U more than he does me>!" RIVELRY!! |
| 2019-06-06 03:56:38 | Staying close to my sister (and mom) part 3 | Fantastic, funny, erotic, awesome, very bold, enjoyable & so many things to say. U dealt well with a touchy subject. The rivalry I expected never happened (except with Martha). I would like to see an epilogue about Martha, her knocked up sister, Karen & Trish relationships resolved as to babies, & their continued membership in the harem. Add to that Sally & Amanda in the follow up epilogue. I love happy endings & this one seems to be very happy,!! |
| 2019-06-06 10:41:24 | Movie Night_(4) | Sam's response (especially in light of her sex education classes) really helped to tone down the situation. Even though Chad's wife's stress provided fuel for his "unfatherly thoughts" concerning Sam, he realized the awkwardness of his needs compared to possible solutions. (He nor his wife realizing "stress relief" via loving sex could help both of them.) Ur presentation (to me) was flawless addressing such a delicate, taboo subject. I'm eager to see how the next chapters unfold. Thanks for sharing Ur talent with Ur readers. |