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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-07 02:47:10 | We Are A Horny Couple | Said I'd already voted but I don't remember the scenario. Expect ch2, when the meet the couple for a followup swap. |
| 2019-06-07 10:58:56 | we needed the money so Sue went out and got paid for sex ( pt 1 ) | Advise U read thru (or have some one read out loud to U) before U post. The plot & details of action are great. Good foundation in that respect. Maybe a little more character building but not required in this scenario. CRITICS, sometimes U have to ."read between the lines" so to speak. For an 8th grade drop out, good work. Not quite professional level now. I have a bach degree but can't spell & grammar school was 60 yrs ago or more. May have forgotten some over the yrs. Congratulations on doing Ur best. Don't give up. Try to get some help on the technical spelling & grammar. Some of it U can do Urself via above suggestions. |
| 2019-06-07 11:31:08 | we needed the money ( pt 2 ) | They write together Anon. Seems one of U could catch a few mistakes before U post. 2 bodies (or heads) are always better than one. Very few guys can suck their own dick & even fewer sluts eat their own pussy. Reading thru before U post and aloud should help correct a few errors. Off course? Next time Dave should go along for a "train ass fuck" Both Mike & Trevor would be as fucked while fucking an ass in front of them, Sue or Ginger leading the train with Mike the caboose. |
| 2019-06-07 11:54:13 | A nice male friendship | Already voted, but don't remember story. Good story, well written, guess I'm loosing it worse after 77 yrs. I still remember MY name and can recount all the cunt's I've fucked, just can't remember one name of a blond. Keep writing. This should not be Ur only post. |
| 2019-06-07 15:18:59 | Mother in laws dream comes true - Part 2 | Great. a few spelling errors, but that didn't distract from the story & action. Still, is Jules going to share Chris with the Blond & will Paul hide everything from Lelia when they get back home? I'm nearly sure he wants a "live & private show" staring Chris & Jules. Chris said that Lelia understood his need for satisfaction beyond her capabilities so maybe she could also enjoy the "live & private" as much as her Dad. Would be hot, Dad & daughter playing with each other watching the live show.. Again, enjoyed Ur presentation, especially the texts & photos on the phone. Paul, Chris & Jules all got exactly what they wanted. Happiness all around. |