| 2019-12-30 04:40:58 |
'American slut' the beginning.
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Fairly de***********ive but needs more. Also longer is better. |
| 2020-01-04 03:27:00 |
MOM'S BFF
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This could be a good story if you fix the spelling and punctuation errors. It's hard to read in such large blocks of text. Use paragraphs and quotation marks and it'll be more fun to read. |
| 2020-01-05 03:36:22 |
Take it All, My King
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Too hard to even bother with in current format. |
| 2020-01-05 04:05:22 |
Stevie The Squirter
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Take your time and make it longer. |
| 2020-01-05 04:52:38 |
Mind-Control Panties Story 1: Incestuous Awakening
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Clever and HOT! |