| 2019-12-11 03:36:28 |
Bateman and Son Photography I
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Great start! Lots of spelling errors but it's such a good story that's those are easily forgotten... |
| 2019-12-13 05:31:27 |
Helping my coworker
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Way too hard to read without correct formatting. |
| 2019-12-16 03:56:56 |
Black Rose pt. 1
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Your stories are always clever and well written. The only suggestion I'd like to make is that I think you mean "whoa", not "woah"? Am I right? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2019-12-16 04:02:52 |
Aratheon: Wicked Witch of the Woods
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I love how your stories connect with each other so often. I wish we lived in the supernatural world you describe so well. |
| 2019-12-16 04:59:13 |
Estranged Sister Eve
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One thing I forgot: I just hope Shay had shoes to wear with her new outfits! |