| 2019-10-24 01:17:57 |
Two from daddy
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Good first effort but you jumped to the sex immediately. More character and plot development make stories more fun. |
| 2019-10-26 03:29:43 |
Fateful Gay Experience
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Why is this being reposted over and over and over? Haven't we suffered enough? |
| 2019-10-27 01:29:15 |
Jack O’ Lantern - A Halloween Story
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Your stories are always clever, creative, and FUN! |
| 2019-10-27 01:54:16 |
Mrs Succubus - A Halloween Story
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I'm going to have to pass on the party but the story is good! |
| 2019-11-05 02:40:29 |
Jessica Alba gets taught a lesson.
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This style of writing is VERY familiar. |