| 2019-11-09 03:40:01 |
The Viramontes House Pt.2
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Dialogue is very stilted and unrealistic. |
| 2019-11-09 03:48:30 |
Home Schooling_(1)
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Laughing my ass off! |
| 2019-11-13 04:27:56 |
All Aboard the FWB Experience
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Jason, Justin, Jamie, Randi??? Good story but please get the names aligned. |
| 2019-11-15 03:28:02 |
a thing about blindfolds_(1)
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I'm surprised at the low rating since I found this wonderfully erotic. Some minor typos but very nicely written. A sensual story! |
| 2019-11-17 03:33:52 |
Lovejoy
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If you're serious, you need to fix spelling errors: heterosexual not hedrosexual; no one not noone; piercing not peircing, etc. It's a decent story but readers notice mistakes. Also, there's a change in the boys' names? |