| 2019-11-28 06:51:26 |
A Game of Basketball Pt. 8
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This cannot be the end. There's no resolution to the dream sequence which was obviously vital to the story. You are too skilled a writer to leave us all hanging. Come on, Mighty Raptor, finish the story please! |
| 2019-12-03 05:11:55 |
Estranged Sister Eve
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This is such a great story that I have enjoyed several times. Characters that seem so real with true emotions. The sex is HOT and makes me feel delightfully salacious. Thanks for another great read. |
| 2019-12-06 04:00:46 |
Obedient Wife
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Paragraphs are way too long! |
| 2019-12-11 03:11:35 |
Mistress Cain
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I know that age restrictions here must be irksome but realism is vital; no one aged 18-20+ is still in this kind of boarding school. Otherwise, it's a good read. |
| 2019-12-11 03:19:52 |
Bateman and Son Photography III
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Where's part 2? |