| 2020-01-25 04:50:01 |
Vampire next door
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An entire sequence was duplicated. While the story began beautifully written, you seemed to rush to get to the "end"; of course, it wasn't the end. Hopefully, you'll continue this intriguing story. Please! |
| 2020-01-26 03:13:11 |
Bateman and Son Photography VI
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Why isn't there more? This is a great story! |
| 2020-01-26 04:43:56 |
The Club, Ch. 5 - Back at Work
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So glad to be a domme. |
| 2020-01-28 04:05:28 |
The World of Erasthay - The Son of Lust Chapter 1: Two Sisters in Need of Their Brother's Seed
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Such fun to read! |
| 2020-01-28 04:12:17 |
SO's "Vampire" - One - Betraitor
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This could be a good story but you need editing. Your dialogue is poorly done. It's a creative idea but definitely needs a good proof reader. |