| 2020-03-17 01:16:04 |
The World of Erasthay - The Son of Lust Chapter 3: Dominating the Sylph MILF
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Great story but using the same words over and over lessened the enjoyment a bit (tangy, breed me are two examples). You're an exceptional writer so I hope you take my suggestion as only a suggestion, not an insult. |
| 2020-03-18 01:27:45 |
Roy and June take Doris again
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As hot as these stories are, any husband who put his wife through such things is a complete asshole. |
| 2020-03-21 02:38:55 |
The Society - Witness Protection
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More about The Society please! |
| 2020-04-22 00:33:37 |
RBF: Tease
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Uh, what? |
| 2020-04-22 00:46:26 |
Wife Customized by Black Lover and Boss
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You write like you're submitting a report. It's too matter-of-fact and dry. The idea is intriguing but it didn't hold my attention. |