| 2020-11-24 02:38:15 |
Becoming Jane
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Why are they always 10 inches? I guess dreams are necessary. |
| 2020-11-08 02:57:03 |
Becoming a Lesbian Slave
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I must be the only person here imagining herself giving Amber an ass whooping! |
| 2020-11-08 03:14:15 |
Jane ch 1
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Not bad but the dialogue isn't well done. You need to correct the grammatical errors also. Read Phoenix Cinders' stories so you can see what great dialogue reads like. |
| 2020-11-08 03:48:16 |
Being the new girl
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Foregoing the comments about the horror of 9/11, this story is written like a newspaper article! It's boring when it could have been exciting. That said, I sincerely hope the lady's soldier husband is home safe. |
| 2020-11-08 03:55:50 |
A new life - part 1
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I hope you're either in therapy (marriage or family counseling) or divorced. You're lucky if you're not in prison. If you're truly a submissive, please find a Master/Mistress who's not decades younger than you. |