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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-09-03 02:16:42 | A Welcomed Guest 4 | Damn, pars. This time you're really going all out. I don't know what to make of all this. I've just got to keep up with this one, too.... |
| 2016-06-21 09:11:17 | A Guy and His...? 29 Dream | I've been reading this series with a great deal of interest. You have come a very long way, pars001. The only thing I would suggest is tgat you make the chapters longer, telling more of the story each time. Had you done that from thebbeginning, you might have only 12 or 13 chapters, but your overall story would be tighter.... |
| 2016-10-20 13:35:32 | it started with my mom 3 | Looks like you have at least two more chapters to write. Better get on it. As regards the twins: figure that about the only wY to tell them apart is one has his cock primarily in her ass, the other primarily in her pussy.... |
| 2016-07-04 03:07:00 | A Guy and his...? 30 Getting Closer_(0) | Goodjo job with this chapter, pars. It advanced the story very well, and gave us a bit more background. Your writing continues to improve. Keep it up, and we'll all keep it up. I already wish I had found a Jinn like Gen a long time ago... in a galaxy far, far away... Oops; different story... |
| 2016-07-04 03:29:13 | A Guy and his...? 31 Juno | I am aware of how time passes here, and what should take only a couple of days may take several weeks. Fortunately, I was able to read chapters 30 and 31 in their proper order. Pars, if this keeps up, you might want to get yourself a professional editor and put these chapters together into book form. I'd suggest waiting until you'vegot the story finished, first. Are you working on the Final War? You should be. It appears that you're getting very close.... |