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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-09-29 16:35:13 | Potential Part 21 | If you read that part with the ellipse and wonder WTF, I couldn't chance getting banned again so I left a few words out. You can read them elsewhere, but you should get the idea without doing that. |
| 2016-11-28 15:04:05 | Potential Part 12 | Thank you ...shewolf!!! The diagnosis is correct. If you saw how many letters I write backwards and upside down you'd know. That's not all, though. My brain takes longer to get my thoughts out through my hands. Yes, we're friendly again. I was never mad at you, just wanted it to be clear that I am doing the best I can. The edits only effected the stuff on paper as it went to text, so you don't have to worry. The camera hasn't been mentioned, but it's only real world time that has passed. In the story hardly any time has passed. Keep the comments come and point out mistakes. There are some. |
| 2017-01-08 14:39:23 | Potential Part 14 | "I don't see what wrong with the ratings you have over 80% + not bad and I started at chapter 14" Considering all the other chapters are above 90% I am concerned. This chapter had a lot of stuff going on before any sex happened, and less sex than most chapters, so I wonder if someone starting with 14 could make an accurate assessment of it. I'm curious how you voted and why. Mostly, I am concerned to know how people following the story feel about each chapter, but if someone pops in at this point, it can also be helpful to me. I want to continue to improve and make the readers happy, hard and wet, if they are female. Thank you. |
| 2016-11-27 20:14:59 | Potential Part 12 | Glad you read all the comments. I try not to mislead, but sometimes I forget what I said. The story is done and I do need proofreaders who actually follow through. Thank you to the guy who showed up at the last minute for 13. The story is done, written on paper, I don't lie, but I have been changing it as I type it. Those changes have a ripple effect and then more time is required. I am always anxious to get chapters out fast, though. |
| 2016-05-31 20:35:51 | Potential Part 5 | Chapter 6 didn't make the cut here, but I'm going to give 7 a shot anyway. I made changes to suit the site. Wolfpub always has the next chapter first and unedited. Nifty after that.6 & 7 are both there. |