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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-09 02:05:41 | Potential Part 27 | AlmostNormal, I guess I shouldn't be surprised that you asked that. It was in chapter one when John's system was covered. Other have asked, too. You can review chapter 1, but in short, john's system was the one on both their computers, supposedly so she could see someone coming, but it only records on his computer. The tech guy mentioned spy cams and that got Candy's wheels turning. |
| 2019-01-15 03:16:46 | Potential Part 17 | Just for the record, Anganell gives the best freakin' feedback ever! I do appreciate any feedback, even if you don't like something. There's a little something nasty for everybody. Yes, Anganell, from personal experience. That's not to say I have done everything in this story, even though I would have it the op presented itself. :-) |
| 2019-01-16 17:31:19 | Potential Part 20 | Thank you again, Anganell for taking the time to write meaningful comments. Mentally, I know what you're saying is true, but feeling it at this point in my life will take some time. I hope one day this writing thing gets easier. I'm battling a lifetime of thinking I was stupid and couldn't write because I can't read well and can't spell. |
| 2019-01-17 15:48:43 | Potential Part 21 | ". . . Evan, Gloria, Candy, etc., are now part of our every day lives." That is the best feedback I have ever received, and it is my only pay, reward and motivation for the countless hours I put into each chapter. When I read a story and I'm sad when it's over because I'll miss the characters, that is a great story, and I am grateful to the author. The fact that I have done that for someone else shows me that my hard work was worth it. Over 25,000 times this story has been accessed, figure 90% were bots, that still leaves 2500 possible readers. I'd love to see that many comments. I appreciate everyone who takes a minute to say something. |
| 2019-01-26 15:30:38 | Potential Part 3 | Fishrmn, keep reading and all will be revealed, but you should know by now that Evan and Deana are twins. Chapter 6 isn't on this site, so you'll have to track it down on another site. There should be something in the comments about it. Sorry it took so long to give you a reply. I rarely get new comments on these older chapters. I promise the writing only gets better as you continue. |