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Comments from Tash88
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-04-11 17:30:13 | Basement Rituals - Part II | I'm working on two new stories, but it will definitely take some time. If you enjoyed 'Basement Rituals', I can recommend you 'What Comes Around.... Goes Around' which was my first work. Thank you for your kind words! |
| 2010-04-24 17:51:50 | Michelle's forgotten physical | Liked it. However, I would have liked to see the sexual acts being a little bit longer and more descriptive. And (but this is me whining ;) ) less Angie. Her name was all over the story non-stop. You picked a good theme for you, you seem to know your terminology and procedures to write stories doe medical fetishists. Keep that up for sure! |
| 2010-04-24 18:07:28 | Vampire slave | The story has potential, I loved the dominant element from the vampire. But I agree that you have to improve your spelling and grammar. After all, a good story is not just the plot.... it's also how well it is written. Work on that (spelling checker ftw?), take your time on describing the sexual acts and your next story should be much better :) |
| 2010-04-24 18:50:35 | Hot Nurse's punishment | Loved this story, you took your time on all the action which definitely added to this story. The beginning wasn't bothering me at all, it gave me the time to get into the story and to feel for the character undergoing the harsh treatment. Only thing which seemed inconsistent was that Ruby enjoyed the oral sex with Dr. Hartley after the assault from previous night. You'd figure she'd severely hate him for it. At least for a day. Good story though!! |
| 2010-07-03 17:50:55 | Basement Rituals - Part III | Who knows, I might write a sequel. I'm working on two other stories at the moment, but after that it's a whole wide world of possibilities. Stay tuned :) |