| 2012-02-07 05:36:45 |
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still a good start but to suggestions. spell check and make them a bit longer with a little bit more detail to the sex action |
| 2012-02-08 05:54:29 |
Happy Thanksgiving Aunt Amy
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Good start and i agreee with some of the comments. one is yes have sex with the aunt at least. two is establish more of a background of the characters to prolong the series. three everyone here says to get them pregnant don't listen to them but if that is the way you want to go then go for it |
| 2012-02-08 06:19:23 |
Best Winter every with my wife's relative's
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IslanDream dont worry you are good but you do need to have a little more detail to your story. about your wirting we all are not english lits like these anonymous jerks that the only thing that they can be negative about is writing. let them write their own stories and see what they replies they get back. i'm sure that they would get back the same repsonse back that they gave |
| 2012-02-08 06:19:56 |
Best Winter every with my wife's relative's
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but i would love to see the next chapter soon |
| 2012-02-22 03:48:42 |
Visit to Aunt April's House (ch.1-5)
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again great story but please put the next chapter alone so we don't have to scroll to the new chapter. and please if you include other family members as some of thes idiots here suggest i like getting mom pregreant do it with class like your stories are |