| 2011-06-20 06:18:28 |
The Kiss Part #3 B
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BOTH WERE GREAT JUST KEEP WRITING AND MORE OF MY DAUGHTERS FRIEND NATALIA |
| 2011-06-21 03:39:40 |
My Two Aunts Part 2
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Good story and i do like the ending since I also live in the Phoenix valley and love the Dbacks and Cardinals. The only thing I would suggest is that make the stories a bit longer (more background, charchter etc..) for each chapter. These are like wham bam thank you mam. |
| 2014-11-06 04:41:15 |
Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris part 4
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Awesome story here. Keep it going and write what you want here. Can't wait for you to post the rest of the series. So keep it coming here. |
| 2011-06-27 06:44:28 |
Danny
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Yes write another story. It was great as a wram up and as long as your aunt story that is posted here. Keep writing the both. |
| 2011-06-27 06:46:38 |
My Aunt Is Just Too Sexy
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As in your Danny story just keep writing what you feel. But just keep writing until you end the story. |