| 2011-07-25 03:59:49 |
kristina
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Sorry but I had to give negative rating. You did have a good story line going but it was to short to get into. I do recommend a sequel and a bit more of the action |
| 2011-08-03 05:39:48 |
it happened on vacation (and continued at home) pt 8
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Yes continue this story. That has to be the most dumbest question. You have a GREAT story going on. Keep it going until the finish. |
| 2011-08-10 04:53:32 |
My Ebony Girl
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Good story so keep writing and just see where you want to take this. |
| 2011-08-10 05:30:20 |
(Day Two) Loving Lisa?s Pretty Pink Pussy Petals
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Jackass you rock. Just keep writing they you want and i wil read them |
| 2011-08-10 05:34:59 |
Meet the Jetsons
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I agree another story is needed. Maybe between Geoge and Judy? Who knows where you can take this. But please no Astro. |