| 2011-07-05 06:10:44 |
Dad and his Girls
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Forget the negative critic's you do have a good story developing and I would like to see at least one or more two chapters |
| 2011-07-05 06:46:12 |
SOUND SLEEPER 2: The Awakening
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So when is the next story. The only suggestion that i have is to make it longer |
| 2011-07-06 06:23:59 |
My Uncle's New Wife; Part 4 Stacy and Mrs. Johnson
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GREAT SERIES AND YES KEEP WRITING THIS STROY UNTIL THE END. |
| 2011-07-11 04:40:30 |
Camping With My Girls - Conclusion
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No this is a good ending to this great story that you have wrote. The only question is what happened to the other wife and husband when this story orginated in the oppertunity? That might be a good side story for a couple of chapters. |
| 2011-07-20 04:25:01 |
Lesbian sisters home alone CH.01
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KEEP WRITING ALL THE GIRLS ARE OVERAGE DUE TO THE NEW POLICY THAT THIS SITE IS ENFORCING. THIS IS STILL A GOOD STORY REGARDLESS OF THE AGE. WHO KNOWS MABYE LIS SIS WANT'S TO JOIN? |