| 2010-04-24 04:12:01 |
An incest birthday chapter 2
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thanks everyone for your feedback. i really appreciate the support. as long as i get good reviews, ill keep it going. oh and onelosthero, yes i did have the aunt catch them but its not gonna turn out how you think it will, i just want you to think that ; ) |
| 2010-05-01 02:42:35 |
An incest birthday chapter 3
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whoa! I didnt mean for an arguement to break out! I was just looking for some constructive criticism. I can see where both sides are coming from though, suz and tomizzo24 thinks redlust was taking personal shots at me with the college reference, but I dont think that was his intention. my microsoft word isnt running so I write on notepad, thats why I ask for criticism. i really do need positive and negative feedback on the storys themselves, so to aviod any future arquements please send the negative comments in a PM as redlust requested so it is not interpreted the wrong way, and thanks for reading my series, your comments and ratings keep it going! |
| 2010-05-10 20:27:11 |
An incest birthday chapter 4
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hey everyone, thanks for the great feedback! unfortunately this might be the last chapter, things are getting hectic and i dont have the time to write anymore. its not for sure that im done writing but if this is my last story thanks to everyone who made my stories what they are. |
| 2010-05-19 01:46:24 |
The nasty sister
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i actually liked it, the armpit thing was a bit much but it was still good 10/10 |
| 2010-05-19 15:12:16 |
Teens like it Teen
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i dont know how this couldve got such a low rating, that was a really good story! would definitely read part 2. just make it longer. |