| 2012-08-12 16:26:17 |
Camp part two
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Yeah just seemed right them breaking up, they are perfect for each other but thats what makes them more likely to break, every little thing can become an argument so breaking them apart was probably the best..third part..jesus now i have to start writing one |
| 2012-08-14 17:12:43 |
Camp part three (unfinished)
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Just so people understand, this story will not have any happy ending, it is made to show the reality of life, all these storys with the "and they lived happily ever after" endings are a bunch of bullshit, a happy ending in life would mean never dying and never been unhappy, so this story is made to show the real side of life |
| 2012-08-14 18:46:37 |
Camp part three (unfinished)
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I posted it so people could have a sneak preview of what was to come you dope, it takes the mystery away from the story and it helps make sure people want more, read a tiny snippet of something then it usually helps makes people want to read more..so what is wrong with me, i'd say nothing, i made a smart move that your tiny brain couldn't comprehend |
| 2012-08-16 19:56:20 |
Camp part three (unfinished)
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Just want to let people know that this chapter is almost complete, the ending has been completed and has got a nice little happy/sad ending, just got the beggining to write now and of course the middle part, few days at most and it will be done |
| 2012-08-19 17:06:13 |
Camp the final chapter
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I know it's a terrible ending, terrible last chapter, terrible story altogether BUT i might see if i can make it a little better with better fight scenes, better love scenes between Jonah and Celeste, maybe a little scene to show how Jonah became the full sort of slave to Lance |