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Comments from Efon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-11-12 09:31:24 | Sharing My Sister Part 6 | Sentences getting better. I would prefer more proper dialog. She said, "Wow!" I said, "Yea." |
| 2011-11-27 09:05:34 | My Sexy Tenants Pt II | I've been loving your stories. More internals! Seems more real, and less money-shot fake-porno to me. Espesially if it's unsafe. |
| 2011-11-27 11:01:05 | IHNC 7.5 – Cats out of Bags and against Doors | Sorry I'm so slow updating my stories, but I want to do them right more than fast. I know some chapters are shorter than others, like the last one, but I wanted to keep view-point changes in seperate chapters and keep time continuity. Trust me, this story will continue for a long time as long as I get good ratings. |
| 2011-12-08 09:01:51 | Step sister's a babe (part 2 - returning the favour) | Definitely HOT! Keep it up! Cannot wait for part 3. |
| 2011-12-30 12:24:42 | The Day Dreams of a Lonely Girl | Very nice. Part 2 should be hot! |