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Comments from Efon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-01-07 13:23:56 | Babysitting Molly | I liked as a kid and DID have fantasies about Rebecca so I liked it. Really needed better formatting, and should have been labeled as a fanfic instead of True Story. |
| 2012-01-07 14:05:37 | Seducing My Stepfather - Part 1 | Yea! Part 2 please! Does she get pregnant? Does Mom find out? Do they have a threesome? |
| 2012-01-16 07:43:34 | Me and My Royal Sister | Liked it, but to short. To me the story should make me feel that I AM the main character, and treat the experience like the best candy you ever had. Time slows down, every sensation gets brutally clear. |
| 2012-01-16 09:48:38 | Who's Watching the Babysitter | Great! Sequel? Maybe she gets pregnant and they get married. Then some years later his daughter, having already been sexually awakened get's her first time with dad. |
| 2012-01-27 14:21:06 | Good Girls.. | Nice for a start. Work a little on grammar and tease it longer and with more details. I always say the best stories are like chocolate so good you let it melt in your mouth for minutes, not swallow it and get it over with. Which is more exciting a stripper who takes a little off at a time, constantly keeping you on edge, or a woman who just comes out naked? Make it last. Close your eyes and articulate EVERY detail because it's worth it every second. |