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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-01 00:45:38 | Rachael’s Story – Chapter 1 – Time stands still | Fantastic start. More PLEASE More. Positive vote and 9/10 pers grade. |
| 2011-06-01 01:42:43 | A Daddy's Love | Firstly Epoch the fuckwit - at the top it says "teen female" and you must be the only cretin on Earth that thinks 10 yrs old is a teen errrrr NO Secondly UP - I can read what I fuckin' feel like and if you let other people to post under your name . .EXPECT the criticism Thirdly UP as mentioned, if it had been correctly labelled as pre-teen I would have left it to the kiddie fucking skanks that will love your shit. If the girl had been 15-16 this would have received a positive vote and my admiration. BUT IT WASN'T labelled correctly, She WASN'T 15-16 and the story DIDN'T get my favour. Live with it. |
| 2011-06-01 21:10:32 | Good news - no negative vote Bad news - no positive vote....Just saw a solid block of text and passed on it. No paragraphs - no read | |
| 2011-06-02 20:31:23 | A Deadbeat's Diary - First night as a Bouncer_(1) | OK, I don't like violence, but that's me. Story was well spaced and very few errors. Still had a stilted feel to it, but that will probably disappear with experience. Bit too much blood, did you kill a chicken while having a fuck??. NOT the best story I have read, BUT a definite improvement over your others. |
| 2011-06-03 00:37:50 | OEDIPULSATION: THROBBING FOR MOM | Oediplex you cur. . . Where have you been. Lovely story well written and spaced and mission executed with extreme prejudice. Positive vote. (Personal 9/10) |