| 2011-05-27 19:20:15 |
Marcys daddy
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Fantastic. This story has GOT to have a sequel. Positive vote and my personal 9/10. |
| 2011-05-27 19:37:26 |
Worthless And Disgusting Cunt-Kitty _(3)
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Sorry. Not this one. To each his (or her ) own but I LOVE women - all women - and any story that shows them as trash is not acceptable to me. I rate this story 5/10 for you excellent writing, but you lose the other five for subject material. |
| 2011-05-27 20:00:07 |
How I lost it
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OK. This story is great. Well written and spaced and bloody enjoyable. You have real talent and I'll be reading all your stories. Positive vote and 8/10. |
| 2011-05-27 20:08:56 |
School trip
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Was this written by the same person as the other stories ???. Yes..very good story but : names ALWAYS start with a capital letter ; circumstances does not start sur. Get a proof reader. Without the distraction of some really bad spelling and grammar, this would be a great story. Still gets Positive vote and personal grade 7.5/10 |
| 2011-05-27 20:56:33 |
Mom-Son Honey Camping 2
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Pure plagiarism. Stolen from another writer. Negative vote. |