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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-23 02:59:19 | Delirium | Thanks O_I, really fun fantasy story. Plenty of sex, well written Positive vote and personal grade 8.5/10. |
| 2011-06-23 04:25:46 | Very good start - and can't wait for more. Positive vote | |
| 2011-06-25 02:21:03 | All for Mr. Redman Chapter 9 | JadeM, You are a silly nice girl. You know I jump on writers who don't care what rubbish they feed their readers. You are far from that bunch of idiots. This story has always been thoughtful and thought provoking, romantic, sexy and just a bloody good read. Thank you Kirei-sama. ii desu yo. |
| 2011-06-25 02:40:40 | My Sweet First Wife | I am sorry, Happy Rabbit, for the learning difficulties you must have but this story is GARBAGE. You have obviously not used Spellcheck because there is an abundance of incorrectly spelled words. Spacing between words is another problem. That's what a tab key is for. Story is incoherent, rambling off subject and poorly planned. Use of capital letters is random and totally illogical. Your score reflects this and will probably not improve. |
| 2011-06-25 21:04:55 | My Gym Buddy Sister | I gave this a positive vote, because I liked the story. The spelling was pretty good except the past tense of the verb to do is I/We did. I ( as in me ) is always a capital I, and sentences always start with a capital letter. ( Stupid illiterate writing because someone doesn't care enough to get it right distracts me and pisses me off.) Spacing was good. Generally, with more care, you COULD be a good writer. Keep trying and I'll keep reading. |