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Comments from Ghostrider939
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-07-04 01:42:33 | The Fat Slob Next Door | Thanks fb, Good to have you back in the saddle. ALWAYS a good read. |
| 2011-07-08 20:50:47 | ELP You bastard. This is why I failed to get my submission in, in time. How the hell could a Dumbo like me even PRESUME to be this good. Positive vote and 10/10 |
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| 2011-07-13 06:40:02 | TEENAGE GIRLS FOR SALE | Funny, fantastic story written by a master. Positive vote 10/10 |
| 2011-07-15 00:05:20 | Really good story DaneJ. I loved it and voted accordingly BUT, because I AM picky, the past tense of drag is dragged, not drug and a girl's waist is beautiful and not to be confused with waste - which is literally garbage. Apart from that, I have watched your progress as a writer, and you have done well. . . .congratulations. | |
| 2011-07-17 22:02:18 | My Very First Time_(1) | Gave you a Positive vote, Teresa, because, for a first story, it wasn't too bad. Using the z instead of 's was daft and ruined your chances of a good score and some of the spelling left a little bit to be desired. I would be REALLY interested in a story from you written properly. |