| 2012-09-15 18:40:49 |
Time For School Pt. 2
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Fuckers, stop making suggestions on what he should write. Suggestions are good sometimes, but in the end he isn't here just to fucking please you, he is here to write what he wants to write so just shut the hell up and let him. I would hope that there is a third part though, this story has potential and it sort of leaves off at a cliffhanger. |
| 2012-09-28 14:01:04 |
Duquan's sister problem Chapter 2
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Please tell me there's a third chapter. :( |
| 2012-10-08 17:26:56 |
Uncharted territory chapter 2
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Who the fuck cares if he lost you two anonymous dudes as readers? You don't even give enough of a damn to make accounts. |
| 2012-10-12 13:11:30 |
THE FIRST TIME_(11)
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Sorry mate, but this is just... Yeah. Why stretch the page? What's the point of that? As far as I can tell this isn't a poem and it sure isn't labeled as one. So why all the line breaks after just one sentence? |
| 2012-10-12 13:14:46 |
2 Policemen, a Mother and her 7-year-old, Pt. 1
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When the hell is the next part? It's been two years man. |