| 2015-02-17 04:04:40 |
Common Erotic Mistakes_(0)
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Taste is different for everyone. But doesn't reading and watching the same shit over and over get boring as hell? Seeing/reading about people with the exact same body types, fucking in the exact same ways, for little to no reason? These are erotic stories for a reason, they are STORIES, they are to be entertaining. Big tits, big dicks, etc. etc. This has to do with willing suspension of disbelief. Sometimes the writers come up with things that just makes the reader stop enjoying themselves and call bullshit on the whole thing. |
| 2015-02-16 17:19:37 |
Common Erotic Mistakes_(0)
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Sorry Mr. Anonymous, but I was raised and educated in America. In American English, punctuation marks always go inside quotation marks. It might not be proper English in the UK, Canada, or in the islands with a British influenced educational system, but it is correct here. |
| 2015-02-15 05:47:57 |
Common Erotic Mistakes_(0)
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Oh yes. No fun allowed anywhere. That's why one of my favorite stories involves strange incest with a kid with a freakishly big dick who calls his orgasms and ejaculations "dick farts". No. I just know what I like. I've been a pervert as long as I can remember, and I just have refined taste. |
| 2015-02-15 23:07:32 |
How My Classmate's Mom Taught Me About Sex [mF]
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It's obvious you didn't write any of your stories. No one switches between two different formats every other story. Then again, that's not even pointing out that you are just using the stories to pad out length just so you can insert a link at the end that most likely leads to spam or viruses. |
| 2015-05-16 00:40:38 |
My Best Friend And Her Mom
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It's pretty damn good, a lot better than most of the shit that has been on here lately. As everyone said, make it longer. But I'm here to give you an actual figure for how much long the next part should probably be. Not counting dialogue, you have nine paragraphs here. So about four times longer for the next part would be a good length, working towards that will also help you pad it out with build up. |