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Comments from Jackofmosttrades
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| 2011-08-23 00:47:32 | Awesome story, keep writing!! There was only one spelling error that I caught, and that was in the begining when Sre turns and bumps into Roscrow and drops the the gruel on him, she's cleaning his boots with a rag; you said 'scoff' instead of 'scuff'. |
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| 2012-01-20 06:59:48 | Genie Chronicles 29 | *reads* "Well, don't take this the wrong way, but Jennifer seems a little... different." Oh Shit. *Me: Hell, yeah, "Oh Shit."!! >X-D *checks # 30* George?... huh? :- *# 31* Wha? /:-0 *# 32* please ... >:-( *# 33* last chance, please be Jack and Jennifer; please, please, please! *opens eyes* ... WTF!?! RAAAAAAGE!!!! D-:< ... -_-** *smokes cig* *more calmly* After reading the comments I have a few things to say, 1) could you send me the name of the original author and where it was originally posted? I'll pm you also, just in case you don't read the comments; 2) could you please check where you got this periodicly to see if it has been updated? 3) I would try to finish this but I would totally butcher it, like 1% likes butcher it. 4) I would like to give the author a few ideas. --Jackofmosttrades |
| 2012-06-07 10:40:14 | Paranormal Phenomenon 8 | I checked out the site. Just as a heads up, the site listed below for PaulPhenomenon i.e. w w w . m r d o u b l e . b z / h t m / a u t h o r s / p a u l p h e n o m e n o n . h t m Is a monthly/tri-monthly/bi-annual/annual by-the-month pay membership site (pay-per-month to view as much content as you wish). I can understand if authors wish to be compensated for the number of hits/views or otherwise be reembursed for the content they post, thats fine with me... *runs out of steam and say's 'shit, wrote my self into a hole... oh well', clicks 'post a comment'* |
| 2014-11-06 09:03:49 | The Aftermath 2 | "Anonymous reader Report 2014-11-06 08:52:36 I hope this will be continued, very soon... --Jackofmosttrades" P.S. Continuity error... Didn't Amber bring Jim back in time X Thousand years to stop the slaughter of her family before it happened? How are there supporting characters with direct family ties to both he and Willow in the 'current'(post time-travel) time? |
| 2017-08-12 11:40:19 | Lost Empire 48 | Excellent Work, Good Sir! Excellent Work! I hope your constitution improves by vast measures in the near future! *Touches helmet brim* --Jackofmosttrades |