| 2011-05-14 15:51:51 |
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Thanks for the great story. Love your writing blease keep it up and can't wate to read your next work. |
| 2011-05-15 19:54:50 |
Keep it in the family_(0)
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This was a great story. I give it a 9/10. The 1 point was for the names that you keep switching Sarah with Jayne name. But all in all I loved it. Hope too see a part two and see what hapens at the party. |
| 2011-05-15 20:00:14 |
Big Brother Bodyguard ch2
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It needs work it was short but it has a lot of potential can't wate to see what hapens next. |
| 2011-05-15 20:14:24 |
My Best Friend and Pizza (part 1)
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This was a great start to a romance story. you just need to do the space's between the paragraphs. But all in all it's a great story. Keep up with the great writing. |
| 2011-05-15 20:56:55 |
The Suicide Attempt
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That was a good story. I hope their is a part 2 to it. I give it 9/10 |