| 2011-06-15 06:56:24 |
My Japanese Love Part 7
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This was wonderful. I agree that you could end it here, and it would be natural. If you do decide to write more in this series lease ensure not to spoil things between Akira and AJ. It is special. |
| 2011-06-21 08:01:54 |
Lost Sailor
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This was so well done. I enjoyed it very much. I hope she does not turn out to be a manipulative user and that maybe they can both find happiness together. He seems to have a good spirit and she obviously saw it in him. Wonderful story... I could saw it all so clearly I felt I was there. I wish I could write with a tenth of your ability. |
| 2011-06-21 08:16:09 |
Defying My Family Part 4
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You just keep getting better and better! Loved it! Keep going. Positive Rating. |
| 2011-06-21 08:25:01 |
My Future Hope
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Nice;y done... Sounds like he had a very hard time before. Maybe he can find happiness. Series or not... well done. |
| 2011-06-21 11:43:41 |
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Not my normal read but really well written. it is fiction and i knew what i was reading. positive rating for writing and at least no one is forced. |