| 2011-05-23 13:20:58 |
Life of a Playboy Chapter 2
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This was an amazing series. I cannot agree more with all the positive comments already made. I really enjoyed it. |
| 2011-06-01 08:40:51 |
The Twin Cheerleaders: Our Snow Day
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Hey... you're trying and this has potential to be a very hot series. Just take a bit more time with development. I see you are actually younger than me, and that's rare on this site for authors I think. Just keep working at the writing and don't get discouraged. I remember a comment from the first story suggesting you use spell check. I think that you must have listened to them as nothing jumped out at me. |
| 2011-06-01 23:49:07 |
DETENTION SUCKS
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I really loved this story... it was amazing. |
| 2011-06-04 00:12:04 |
A Summer 'Job'
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That was pretty wild. I like your style and I think it read well. I am probably not the best judge, but I liked it. |
| 2011-06-04 00:19:12 |
MIchelle Part 1
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I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your creativity. |