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Comments from Charmbrights
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-15 06:31:57 | Enslaved, Entrapped 14-16 | You ask, "What would you like to see happening in the 'scene' in the upcoming chapter 17?" I don't know - I am reading your story because it's YOUR story, and not my ideas. If I want to read my ideas I'll go to my stories. |
| 2012-07-18 05:16:52 | Not given a chance (chapter 4) | I have sent you a private message. |
| 2013-01-11 11:30:33 | slaver or collecter HANNA COMES TO THE USA | Please read your PMs |
| 2013-02-14 05:35:31 | The Hitchhiker Part 1 | An interesting start. I agree about the spacing, and it is written almost all in the past tense which is good, but occasionally you have dropped into the present, which jars a little. |
| 2013-04-06 05:19:43 | Mother and daughter_(0) | This would have been much easier to read if you had put "quotes" round the speech parts as: I said, "What was that for?" |