| 2017-11-15 14:12:19 |
Moms adventure with tribal men_(1)
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Punctuatuion |
| 2016-09-10 16:43:34 |
City Guardsman - Chapter 6
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Sadly there is a strong rumour that Ka Hmnd has passed away. |
| 2016-12-28 12:32:51 |
Three Rules When Writing Longform Erotica
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I would add a fourth rule: make notes of everything you don't put in the story. If there is a particular house or place draw a rough plan - that way you won't mess up the geography. Note everything you think about all the characters, that way you won't confuse the reader. Keep notes of the time-line of the story and the ages of the characters for the same reason. Often these notes are nearly as long as the novel. |
| 2017-04-04 10:59:38 |
My Dear Sweet Slave: Chapter 6
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" I'm dying here!" Please finish the story first. |
| 2017-05-10 10:26:42 |
The End of the World but New Start
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The idea is good, but the writing is shocking. That's OK, you can learn to write better, nobody can learn how to get ideas. |