| 2018-03-14 13:02:42 |
The Captain's Bride
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I have long been an admirer of your writing, but this is brilliant! |
| 2018-05-24 15:52:56 |
Mothers Just Want To See There Daughters Succeed_(7)
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Pay more attention to punctuation, The lack of capitals and full stops purs readers off. More comments if you write to me. |
| 2018-06-21 19:00:21 |
Sold into a night mare (Part 2)
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I tried to send you a private message about vthis story but XNXX won't let me. Please contact me with a way to do so. |
| 2018-07-27 15:36:56 |
Devil's Island CH 2
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Where can I find Ch. 1, please? |
| 2018-10-05 15:40:54 |
Online Slave Market (fixed)
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Clearly English is not your mother tongue. Go to a site which has Volunteer Editors and use one. My novels (don't buy they ase free on other sites) a1adultebooks.com slope ebooks slope s_51.htm |