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Comments from Dizzyworks673
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| 2012-10-02 02:41:37 | Hidden Memories(Part Five) | Wow great bombshell in this chapter, great job! |
| 2012-10-03 18:31:48 | To the Anonymous reader 2012-10-03 17:37:49, You asked were all the wild sex and public displays of nudity were. To answer that you have to concider the subject matter of the chapter. I don't add sex scenes to simply add a sex scene. It has to feel natural to me for the scene I'm writing or it won't feel right to you when you read it. Yes the story has become more emotional then sexual, that's because we are nearing the end. It's called the lead up my friend and thats how stories work. It wouldn't be intresting to read if he just simply jerked off and banged out another chick every scene. In the end you need to write an ending that HOPEFULLY everyone will be satisfied with. That's what I'm working towards. There are a couple more twists yet to come and a sister to come home again yet, but for the ending to work you need the emotional part too. |
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| 2012-10-03 18:33:22 | Sorry to make everyone wait for so long but it will be a little while until I get my next chapter done. I'm working on a sub project right now for the forum and I'm really busy doing a home remodle for a family member. So I can only write in my little bit of free time. I will post it as soon as it's written. | |
| 2012-10-06 04:19:45 | Ok to the person below let me pull the car over so the slow kids can catch up. I will explain it again, I NEVER SAID THAT HE MARRIED ABBY! LEARN WHAT A STORY MISDIRECTION IS! AND IF HE WASN'T SUPPOSED TO GET BACK TOGETHER WITH ASH WHY DO YOU THINK SHE HAD HER OWN SERIES? IT WAS TO KEEP HER IN THE STORY UNTIL THEY REMET. I'm sick of explaining myself to people who don't get it. I haven't twisted my own words, forgotten my plotline or changed the direction of the story. Not once have I veared off course, just because it isn't ending the way eveyone likes doesn't mean that I didn't follow through with everything I foreshadowed before. AND NO JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE IS HOLDING SOMEONES HAND AT A WEDDING DOESN'T MEAN THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED! I wrote it exactly as I said it would be, just because people made assumptions isn't my fault. If I have to keep explaining it to people it means it's above your reading level and maybe I should just stop and not end it at all on this si |
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| 2012-10-06 05:52:21 | To the people out there who get it I'm sorry I kind of went off in the last comment but I get sick of people telling me how to write my story. I get private messages all the time from people who think they know my story better then me and how I need to end it. Keep in mind that I will end the story how it ends, I can't make everyone happy so if the story doesn't end the way you think it should I'm sorry but the ending is the ending. I had a clear plan on how this story was supposed to end from the beginning. What surprizes me the most is how many people are getting mad that Joey didn't marry Abby, If they would have read ANY PART of this story then they would have realized that Joey NEVER loved her that way. She's been dating Katie since chapter 9 and they've had the wedding planned for since chapter 15 so how is anyone surprized that Abby married the person she's been dating and planned to marry? |