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| 2012-10-06 23:00:42 | Continued from above... For example Katie wasn't my sister, she was my cousin. Abby really was my first girlfriend and her and Katie never actually met. I took two real people and situations and changed them around for the story. I based thier relationship on another two ex-girlfriends of mine who did get married. Continued above.... |
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| 2012-10-06 23:04:43 | Continued from below So this is what I mean about real situations re-worked and in some cases I combined real things that happened to multiple frineds and made those things happen to one character. For another example of that, the girl Abby is based on didn't get raped by multiple guys at her prom. That did actually happen to my bestfriends little sister, and it happened just as I told it in the story. The girl that Ash is based on really was 13 when I was 17, that's when we met. We she really did become my girlfriend when she was 15 and again when she was 17. I loved her very much. The girl Ash is based on didn't get raped in a light tower but that did happen to another one of my ex-girlfriends. That girlfriend had told me about going to summer camp and getting raped by two local boys. But again I can't make new characters for every insident that I'm writing about so I combine real events onto one character. Finished above.... |
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| 2012-10-06 23:08:40 | Continued from below. I hope that all makes sense as I know it was more then you were asking. The character of Joey is me in the sense of how I would react or behave in the situations that take place in the story, he has my beliefs and dreams along with my sense of the world. But with that said we have had different lives. I was just mad last night, have no fears I will finish this story. I won't leave you readers without knowing how it ends. |
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| 2012-10-07 19:53:54 | The Cherry Shop | Thanks for the feedback, I like it when people give me real constructive comments. This story is a bit of a streach for me as I usually don't write macob type stuff. I wrote this for a contest and when I came up with the idea I had a simple story in mind but as I began to write it started to turn into something bigger. As far as giving up, no I didn't give up but I had to go back and cut somethings out. This was because the story was becoming to long for a competition and because I was running out of time to write it. only got it submitted right at the cut off point. As far as the end of the story goes, I had always planed or Alice to die. In all the talk of the shop nothing was ever said about Matty's mother. The women die at the birth because the creature is born of its non-human form and rips up their insides when ready to be born. Thanks so much for the support and I've already started working on the next TSB chapter. |
| 2012-10-09 03:53:43 | The Cherry Shop | To the person below and everyone else, your right that this story isn't in my usual "Comfort Zone" as it were. The theme of the contest I wrote this for was horror based, I liked the challenge of having to write something different. Thanks to everyone for reading. Please take a minute to read all the great CAW13 entries on the sex stories forum, voting begins soon. |