| 2012-10-06 05:58:48 |
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I'm not going to change the ending of the book to make one single person happy. Like I said I've had a clear path to the ending since the beginning, That is why Ash got her own chapters, she had to stay relevent to the story, If I hadn't done that she would have disapeared in chapter 8 and showed up again in chapter 17. That is a long time to be out of a story and still have people care about her character.
If you, the readers, don't like the story that's fine but I've had enough of the reader calling me dumb, or telling me I forgot my own storylines. I've tried my best to write a good story for you, the readers, and it's free to read so stop bitching that it takes to long or that you thought I said something I did't.
Sorry but I have a job and I write other stories too, some not meant for a porn site. I don't always have the time to just write this and whats the point if all your going to do is bitch about it anyway. |
| 2012-10-06 14:21:58 |
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Thanks for the words of encoruagment. It was about two a.m. when I wrote that last night. I've been working on other projects I have to have done by the end of the day today and I just got fustraited. What people don't realize is that when an author writes a book for publication they can sometimes take years to write it. But when it's published you get the whole story in one piece.
Publishing chapters here one at a time makes people think you can just churn things out like a crank, it dosen't work that way. Not if you want something readable.
I wrote some misleading statements through out the story so that it wouldn't be so predictable and people might be a little surprised when I got to those points in the story. That's how writing a story works, if everyone could predict the whole thing it wouldn't be worth doing.
That goes for who his sister is too. We have met her in the story so far. There were some BIG clues given as to who she was if people saw them. Continued |
| 2012-10-06 14:30:49 |
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Continued from below.
I've slowed down my chapters to try to make them right, I've always had a clear picture in my head of how it will end, but after 500 pages of story and dialoque I sometimes have to go back and double check that something I'm writing doesn't contradict something new. I'm a person who can't stand continuety error in the stories I read or movies. So I do my best to not let them happen in my work.
That could be why I got so angry with people for suggesting I have them in my story. I have a path to the end that I'm heading to and along the way there is still more secrets to discover. I'm sure just as people are mad about Abby's wedding they will be upset when the sister discovered.
I'm also re-writing the whole the entire for errors and adding to the original text to make it a little more detailed. When the story is I want to have the re-visions done at the same time as I end he book. That way I can repost the whole story in its completed form. |
| 2012-10-06 14:31:32 |
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Thanks for the words of encoruagment. It was about two a.m. when I wrote that last night. I've been working on other projects I have to have done by the end of the day today and I just got fustraited. What people don't realize is that when an author writes a book for publication they can sometimes take years to write it. But when it's published you get the whole story in one piece.
Publishing chapters here one at a time makes people think you can just churn things out like a crank, it dosen't work that way. Not if you want something readable.
I wrote some misleading statements through out the story so that it wouldn't be so predictable and people might be a little surprised when I got to those points in the story. That's how writing a story works, if everyone could predict the whole thing it wouldn't be worth doing.
That goes for who his sister is too. We have met her in the story so far. There were some BIG clues given as to who she was if people saw them. Continued |
| 2012-10-06 22:56:35 |
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Thanks to the last few people for your words of encouragement. To the person a couple down, NO this isn't the last chapter. I will have a real end to the story. There are still lose ends to tie up. As far as your second question I will paste her a copy of how I answered that question the last time someone asked me; As much as there is a Joey I am him. A lot of writers put themselves into the story, and I find it's easier to tell the story if I play a part in it somewhere. Joey is based on how I act in any given situation, and the story is based on real things that have happened with the girls in my life. I've said it before on the sex stories site but maybe not here that this story is true from the standpoint that each girl and situation is based on something that really happened. Now with that said I changed the names, ages, and familial relationships of all the characters and put the story together in the way I wanted to tell it.
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