| 2012-04-25 11:46:50 |
Across the Hall
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Great opening chapter can't wait for part2! |
| 2012-04-26 01:36:46 |
A Game of Inches - Part One.
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Awesome story! Well thought out and well written. |
| 2012-04-27 17:52:24 |
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Great catch about the note. It actually gets explained in the next Ash's Diary chapter. Nice pick up on the forshadowing. |
| 2012-04-27 18:27:47 |
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The Ash chapters will eventually come together with the main story again when she becomes a main character again. I just didn't want to leave out her her stories while she was away. |
| 2012-04-29 00:48:18 |
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To the unknown reader 4-28-12 22:52:28 to answer your question, this story is based on real events. I took things that have happened to me and spun around names, places, dates and familial relations to tell this story the way I wanted to write it. |