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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2012-10-09 04:34:17 | A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue | well done. the way that you told the story in this last chapter shows that it is the way that YOU wanted the story told. This story could be compiled (and possibly edited to fit your vision instead of your reader's wants) and marketed to a publisher; it is professional in both presentation and crafting. I will be waiting for your next offering. |
| 2012-10-09 04:36:05 | A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue | BTW - 68 comments in about 12 hours I THINK you made an impression. |
| 2012-10-21 12:16:12 | Horse, You might want to add the links to your forum thread regarding this story as well to make it easier for those who know how to roam over there to find your stuff over here. I would also recommend posting the tags in that thread so that those who WANT to read your work will recognize it. ---- note --- this is being written before I actually read the first of the three tails oops, forgive the slip - TALES |
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| 2012-10-22 03:33:30 | Broken Birds, Part 15, Maria and Juanita | rating of 20 - ignore the sniveling idiots and read the forum. |
| 2012-10-26 14:12:45 | The Assassins Gambit: she who has the amethyst eyes | The proof reader missed a few but not enough to mar the work. Thank you for compiling the whole and making it available in one work. |