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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-04-24 12:05:52 | Boy in the grass 45 | The civil suit and assault charges are based on claims by the "victim". The arrest is thus a direct result of the civil suit. Dramatic license can be claimed for avoiding the grand jury which WOULD have seen the video and derailed the necessity of the sheriff's involvement. |
| 2014-05-04 09:05:31 | Boy in the grass 52 | I will vote on this partial chapter like I did on the last one because the storytelling is just so good. That does not mean that I like partial chapters and the "interrogation" of Thomas Wu should be one chapter from his abduction through Alice's final act. To the Anon reader asking about how any confession will be used - they are not going to be submitting the confession to court; they will be using the information to break his contacts and destroy him in the real world instead. Thomas Wu will not have the ability to hurt the family anymore once they are done with him. |
| 2014-08-03 20:36:31 | My Weekend with a Virgin | Does that mean that there IS a part II? I really hope so. |
| 2013-01-21 20:52:48 | Moden Mage Chapter 20 | Interesting chapter. Good development and foreshadowing without being overly generous with insights. I DEFINITELY want more of this to read |
| 2013-01-28 15:43:05 | Modern Mage Chapter 22 | I only wish that you has gone ahead and left the battle scene in the story Tremendous chapter and I love what you did with Arthur |