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Comments from darthel0101
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-03-10 16:58:03 | Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 25-26 | normally I do not rate a chapter in a larger work but this one just BEGGED for a positive vote. WELL done. |
| 2013-03-11 00:28:03 | The Fall of Paradise: Chapter 4 | Thank you for continuing this story; I hope to see more soon. |
| 2013-03-12 07:28:23 | Winter War: Legend of the Snow Fox. | interesting fin I read the story through its presentation in the forum but am actually disappointed in the way that the story is closed out - there was TOO much story added in the last pages which actually detracted from the focused story that was presented before. |
| 2014-08-14 23:37:47 | Fun in bed with sleeping younger sister | Liked the story and would like to hear more |
| 2013-03-22 20:30:21 | My Photogenic Mom Chapter 3 | get rid of the wall of words by double spacing some paragraphs. When you change speakers, change paragraphs. When you change subject, change paragraphs. |